miercuri, 25 iulie 2018
MAINICHI haiku in English
raspberries --
seeds of a sunset sky
in the boiling jam
--
Steliana Cristina Voicu (Prahova, Romania)
Selected by Dhugal J. Lindsay
https://mainichi.jp/english/articles/20180625/p2g/00m/0fe/130000c
seeds of a sunset sky
in the boiling jam
--
Steliana Cristina Voicu (Prahova, Romania)
Selected by Dhugal J. Lindsay
https://mainichi.jp/english/articles/20180625/p2g/00m/0fe/130000c
duminică, 22 iulie 2018
Daily best 3 Haikus, 22 iulie 2018
※
Doina Maria Tudor
●
averse de pluie -
si lourdes les branches du noyer sur le toit
【美音訳】
にわか雨
屋根の上のクルミの木の枝はとても重い
sâmbătă, 21 iulie 2018
THIRD PLACE
14
valentine's day
unfolding an old
love letter
Cezar Florescu
VOTES:222*** SCORE:12
COMMENTS: The poem - the starry sky - shows the beauty of haiku and why we keep writing ...
world cup -
deep inside it
emptiness
--Ana Drobot (Bucharest, Romania)
VOTE:311*** SCORE: 08
COMMENT 1: This haiku shows the uncertainty and the expectations involved in the tournament.Nice juxtaposition between line one and line three.Good haiku.
COMMENT 2: I like the expression of attitude through image, even though I don’t entirely share the attitude.
before the payday
nothing in my pockets...
only the eastern wind
--Vasile Moldovan, Romania
VOTES:2***** SCORE:02
sharp crash of thunder
a grasshopper leaps into
the scarecrow’s pocket
--Cristina Apetrei
VOTES:211*** SCORE:07
COMMENTS: beautifully and humorously shown fear of the storm
https://wwwcaribbeankigokukai.blogspot.com/
14
valentine's day
unfolding an old
love letter
Cezar Florescu
VOTES:222*** SCORE:12
COMMENTS: The poem - the starry sky - shows the beauty of haiku and why we keep writing ...
world cup -
deep inside it
emptiness
--Ana Drobot (Bucharest, Romania)
VOTE:311*** SCORE: 08
COMMENT 1: This haiku shows the uncertainty and the expectations involved in the tournament.Nice juxtaposition between line one and line three.Good haiku.
COMMENT 2: I like the expression of attitude through image, even though I don’t entirely share the attitude.
before the payday
nothing in my pockets...
only the eastern wind
--Vasile Moldovan, Romania
VOTES:2***** SCORE:02
sharp crash of thunder
a grasshopper leaps into
the scarecrow’s pocket
--Cristina Apetrei
VOTES:211*** SCORE:07
COMMENTS: beautifully and humorously shown fear of the storm
https://wwwcaribbeankigokukai.blogspot.com/
First edition of Santoka International Haiku Contest
1st place
Eduard Tara, Romania
young leaves –
enough place
for everyone
Atlas Poetica 33 : A Journal of World Tanka Published by Keibooks
white salon
and the same
piano
like back
then —
I have time for
a waltz
maybe you’ll
come
x
salonul alb
și același pian
ca atunci –
mai am timp pentru un vals,
poate vii
2
abandoned horse
in a snowy
field —
I hear
the loneliness
galloping
softly around
x
cal abandonat
pe-un tăpșan cu
zăpadă
împrejmuită –
singurătatea sună
a galop în surdină
3
boat facing the
sky
from the bottom
of the sea —
your lost
shadow
and mine
awaiting each
other
x
în adâncul mării
o barcă întoarsă
cu fața spre
cer –
două umbre
se-așteaptă:
a ta de ieri, a
mea de mâine
4
black clouds
chasing a
muddled bird
with no mate —
if I turned
around
you might think
I’m crying
x
s-au strâns
nori,
hăituind o
pasăre
fără pereche –
daca m-aș
întoarce
ai putea crede
că plâng
5
black oil slick
washed up on
the beach —
looking
in the dead
dolphin’s eye
I see a part of
me
X
mareea neagră
s-a întins lăbărțat
pe plajă –
în ochiul delfinului mort
văd o parte din mine
Lavana Kray
miercuri, 18 iulie 2018
Haikuniverse
haiku by Maria Tirenescu
returning home –
my mother's garden
is full of weeds
my mother's garden
is full of weeds
July 18th, 2018
luni, 9 iulie 2018
duminică, 8 iulie 2018
Asahi Haikuist Network
river of light--
paper lanterns guide
the ancestors' souls
--Vasile Moldovan (Bucharest)
http://www.asahi.com/ajw/articles/AJ201807060003.html
vineri, 6 iulie 2018
Tanka Society Of America - Ribbons Spring/Summer 2018
this pressed flower
still stirs me...
if I were a leaf,
I'd become your book mark
after death
xxx
floarea presată
încă mă mai tulbură...
dac-aș fi frunză,
ți-aș rămâne semn de carte
după moarte
Lavana Kray
Abonați-vă la:
Postări (Atom)