A.Kigo Theme:
EVENING GLOW
War Memorial -
the sunset reddens
the deep silence
Cezar-Florin Ciobîcă
(1,2,2) = 9 pts
**Very moving. We have a good straightforward setting up first line,
and a phrase where even the sunset has its moment of silence. The
middle line really lifts the whole last two line phrase
first kiss –
in the girl’s eyes
evening glow
Virginia Popescu
PHOENIX
(0,2,5) = 9 pts
rainy evening glow -
the moon will rise again
on the dried pool
STOPS
(1,0,1) = 4 pts
sunset
swallowing my words ...
blood tests results
Sebastian Lucacs
(0,1,1) = 3 pts
(0,0,3) = 3 pts
so less
from my past -
evening glow
Eduard TARA
Romania
(0,0,1) = 1 pts
No Points
Evening glow -
Is this a poppy or
a shooting star?
Steliana Cristina Voicu
Ploiesti, Romania
autumn twilight
like a rainbow -
amazed child
Miorita
evening glow...
the old couple's gold rings
out of sight
Cristina-Monica Moldoveanu
**Intriguing phrase. Is it because of the end of day that the fear of
home invasion grows (although early morning and afternoon invasions
are more common), or is it a private practice between the couple?
B.Free Format Theme:
VEGETABLE(S)
old woman –
in her wrinkled hands
a smooth tomatoe
Virginia Popescu
PHOENIX
(0,5,6) = 16 pts
vegetable market -
wandering among
fresh colors
Eduard TARA
Romania
(0,1,4) = 6 pts
a group of girls
picking bedstraws -
the first stars
Miorita
(0,0,6) = 6 pts
small town
my freckled neighbor
sells tomatoes
Cristina-Monica Moldoveanu
(0,0,6) = 6 pts
**Very sweet! Tomatoes are fruit though, not vegetables, didn't your
neighbour know that?
the basic numbers -
another spoon of spinach
before the dessert
Cristina Oprea
(0,0,2) = 2 pts
steady drought ...
dreaming of
growing lettuce
Cezar-Florin Ciobîcă
(0,0,2) = 2 pts
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