78 participants took part in 15th Indian Kukai,
and they came from 25 different countries.
The theme of this edition was ASH.
FOURTH PLACE
fields of ash -
raindrops explodes
one by one
-Mihail Buraga
[ Bucharest,Romania]
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ashes... the history lessons they know by heart
- Ana Drobot
[ Bucharest, Romania ]
( 5,0,0 ) = 5 points
My mother's body
only a handful of ash...
nothing else
- Vasile Moldovan
[ Bucharest, Romania ]
( 1, 0, 1 ) = 4 points
- Vasile Moldovan
[ Bucharest, Romania ]
( 1, 0, 1 ) = 4 points
old cowboy in love –
wood ash stirred in water
for stomach burning
- Miruna Covor
[ Bucharest, Romania ]
( 1,1,0 ) = 3 points
- Miruna Covor
[ Bucharest, Romania ]
( 1,1,0 ) = 3 points
spring wind –
she scatters the ash from
the last cig together
- Dan Iulian
[ Bucharest-Romania ]
- Dan Iulian
[ Bucharest-Romania ]
the Club of Rome -
global warming think tank full
of cigar ashes
- Nicu Stopel
[ Bucharest, Romania ]
- Nicu Stopel
[ Bucharest, Romania ]
from now on the words
as the ash –
breaking up letter
- Capotă Daniela Lăcrămioara
[ Galaţi ,Romania ]
Felicitari tuturor autorilor, ma bucura numarul mare care patrund in cimpul globalizat al haikuului cu texte autentice, frumoase texte mai putin cel al autoarei Miruna Covor, in general trebuie avut in vedere culoarea locala,iar primul este un haiku inedit, ca sa nu mai spun ca cel al lui V. Moldovan este al unui autor care se vede ca scrie simplu si expresiv, asa cum cer "normele" scrierii unui haiku
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