Ginyu Haiku Gallery. Selected and commented by Ban'ya Natsuishi.
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1
some wood chips
in the Johari window –
I light the fire
in the Johari window –
I light the fire
***
câteva așchii
în fereastra Johari –
aprind focul
2
long
way backward –
at the end of the tunnel
at the end of the tunnel
benches
without legs
***
drum lung înapoi –
la capătul tunelului
bănci fără picioare
3
excavators –
in front of their home
immovable old men
in front of their home
immovable old men
***
escavatoare –
neclintiți din poarta casei
niște bătrâni
Comment:
"Not many haiku submitted by Lavana, but they are more suggestive than before".
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