Haiku in English on a set them
Award for Excellence
cold stones
the “no” you said
between two steps
Eduard TARA
Comment
The photo-haikuist crafted a conversation poem. We hear just the interlocutor’s side of the dialog, but we feel the author’s side through the coldness of the steps. The haiku maintains a good rhythm and perfect line endings that match the stride of the couple approaching Isaniwa Shrine who are likely in need of saying a prayer.
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