First Place ($100)
hopscotch
a little girl hops
into the birdsong
Andreea
Lebaduca
Botosani,
Romania
Judges
Notes: This take on Basho’s old pond haiku is fresh.
It creates contrast within itself via synaesthesia, and within the greater
haiku body of work as it constructs a youthful foil to the famous ancient pond
haiku of Basho. Even beyond that, it still manages to impress with a strong
image and kigo, evoking that sense of nostalgia and joy we all crave.
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