theme: yellow
Dan C. Iulian, Honorable Mention
library
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the
silence of the words
yellowed
by time
Beverly
Acuff Momoi comment:
We have a different
use of yellow in this haiku; here it’s a verb. Although it carries the notion
of color, when it is a verb, it conveys aging, and so my response is more
reflective, sad.
https://thehaikufoundation.org/thf-monthly-kukai-june-2024-2/
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