first date
first kiss in the shade
of her family tree
--
Dan Iulian (Bucharest, Romania)
Selected by Dhugal J. Lindsay
https://mainichi.jp/english/articles/20240626/p2g/00m/0su/029000c
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first date
first kiss in the shade
of her family tree
--
Dan Iulian (Bucharest, Romania)
Selected by Dhugal J. Lindsay
https://mainichi.jp/english/articles/20240626/p2g/00m/0su/029000c
ENGLISH LANGUAGE SECTION – RESULTS
FIRST PRIZE
Eduard Tara
cherry tree’s bark
after the war two names
still together
THIRD PRIZE
Capotă Daniela Lăcrămioara
cherry blossoms –
grandpa's putting on
his light shoes
AWARD FOR OVERALL PERFORMANCE
Cezar Florescu – Romania
cherry blossoms …
if they could make disappear
the spots on mom's lungs
*
koi pond
cherry petals extend
the Milky Way
*
cherry petals
a text on the enlightenment
read in braille
RUNNERS-UP
Florentin Untanu
refugee child
cherry petals dotting
his mandala
Dan C. Iulian
cherry tree in bloom –
on branches and twigs
small bouquets of light
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FLORILÈGE
THÈME LIBRE
quelques coquelicots
près de la photo de grand-mère –
la lune parmi les nuages
Maria TIRENESCU, Roumanie
vent de guerre -
au bord du lac ton ombre
de plus en plus agitée
Rodica P. CALOTĂ, Roumanie
café amer -
la cuillère ne peut pas
dissoudre la lune
Rodica P. CALOTĂ, Roumanie
chevaux sauvages -
la ligne d'horizon
dépoussiérée
Rodica P. CALOTĂ, Roumanie
tulipes rouges –
les lumières du traffic
m’inspirent à rêver
Ana DROBOT, Roumanie
lumière de printemps –
mes crayons de couleurs
dans les nids des oiseaux
Ana DROBOT, Roumanie
cerisier en fleur –
j’écris quelques mots
d’amour pour toi
Ana DROBOT, Roumanie
seul sur le chemin
d'on ne sait où le chant
d'un coucou
Mirela BRAILEAN, Roumanie
ménage de printemps
l'araignée change la toile
de la fenêtre
Mirela BRAILEAN, Roumanie
le jardin fleuri
la belle dame au chapeau
laisse son parfum
Mirela BRAILEAN, Roumanie
theme: yellow
Dan C. Iulian, Honorable Mention
library
-
the
silence of the words
yellowed
by time
Beverly
Acuff Momoi comment:
We have a different
use of yellow in this haiku; here it’s a verb. Although it carries the notion
of color, when it is a verb, it conveys aging, and so my response is more
reflective, sad.
https://thehaikufoundation.org/thf-monthly-kukai-june-2024-2/
Adult Award
Michael Dylan Welch Judge's Remarks: Some species of snowdrop flower in winter, bringing a white
brightness to the dreariness of the darkest season. The middle line also
suggests Kazuo Ishiguro’s, The Remains of the Day, a novel about loyalty and
moral dilemma. What’s left of the day, and perhaps also the season and of life,
becomes more optimistic because of the flower.
Andreea Lebaduca
Botosani, Romania
Judge's Remarks: This
poem’s first line shows us that we’re on an airplane. The second line presents
realistic comfort against the stress of midair turbulence. And then the third
line provides a twist—that this friend is not real but imaginary. This could be
an adult as easily as we might picture a child. Although the held hand is
imagined, the turbulence is real. But surely the comfort is also real.
Gian-Luca Niculce
Botosani, Romania
no
one attentive
to the round-up lesson
cherry blossoms
Judge's
Remarks: Learning how to round
up numbers is a common lesson in younger school grades. But no one is paying
attention because of cherry blossoms outside the school window. They are
beautiful and ephemeral, perhaps shimmering in a breeze. How could any student
pay attention to their lesson? What each student may not yet realize is their
own ephemerality. Perhaps the real lesson is the beauty of nature.
Antonia Chersan
Botosani,
Romania
Judge's Remarks: We may immediately wonder who made the boat. Surely the person who also witnesses the dragonfly alighting on their creation. That small boat serves as respite for the small dragonfly, surely just as making the paper boat is a kind of respite or joy for the person who made it. Perhaps both the person and the dragonfly are seeking calm in the face of challenge and change.
Pe masa goală
ochelarii bunicei și
pipa bunicului -
singurele suveniruri
din copilăria mea
On the empty table
the grandma`s glasses and
the grandpa`s pipe-
the only keepsakes
since my childhood
şotron
încă mǎ mai joc
cu umbra mea
copilul meu interior
a ieşit din nou afară
hopscotch
still fooling around
with my shadow
my inner child
is out again
Ana Drobot, Romania
altă vacanță
copacii și bunica
mai mici
another vacation
trees and grandma
smaller
Luminița Suse, Canada
https://luminitahaiku.wordpress.com
rochia de mireasă
unicornul fetiței
se întoarce acasă
wedding dress
the little girl's unicorn
returns home
Mircea Moldovan, România
printre umbre -
cu cireșe la urechi
copilăria
among shadows -
with cherries on the ears
childhood
Carmen Duvalma, Romania
ce-a mai rǎmas
din visele copilǎriei –
nori împrǎştiaţi
what`s left
of my childhood dreams –
scattered clouds
Ana Drobot, Romania
o călătorie în timp
pe Amintirile din copilărie*
ochelarii bunicii
*Este una dintre principalele contribuții literare
ale autorului român Ion Creangă și este
considerată de critici capodopera lui Creangă.
a journey through time
on the Childhood memories*
grandmother's glasses
*Is one of the main literary contributions
of Romanian author Ion Creangă and it is
considered by critics to be Creangă's masterpiece.
Mirela Brăilean, Romania
un ciot de măr –
doi copii studiind
un nasicorn inert
apple stump –
two children studying
an inert nasicorn
Maria Tirenescu, Romania
grădina viselor
în cufărul bunicii
rochia de mireasă
dreams garden
in grandma's trunk
the wedding dress
Mircea Moldovan, România
album cu poze –
pașii copilăriei
pe câmpul cu flori
photo album –
chidhood steps
in the flower field
Haiku: Mihaela Cojocaru, Romania
Photo: Tiberiu Tizu, Romania