sâmbătă, 2 martie 2013

Shiki Monthly Kukai/feb.2013


Kigo theme:
WHITHRED PLANTS

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withered leaves -
a closer look at
her lifeline

Cezar F. Ciobîcă
(0,2,14) = 18 pts
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sunset
lingering
on a withered thistle

Virginia Popescu
(0,2,10) = 14 pts
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abandoned house
the withered ivy
still hugs a wall

Eduard TARA
(1,1,6) = 11 pts
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mown grass -
stars and fireflies
exchanging blinks

Lavana Kray
(0,2,2) = 6 pts
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Valentine's day -
on the windowsill
a withered rose

Laura Csilla
(0,2,1) = 5 pts
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spring--
a green stalk
under withered leaves

Dica
(0,0,2) = 2 pts
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snowdrops sentinel
by withered red leaf carpet
nice to meet the spring

STOPS1 Point
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No Points This Time
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old man sips tea
watching the withered flowers –
the hot sidewalk

Miorita
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Free Format Theme:
COVER

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last letter
lily petals cover
her words

Eduard TARA
(1,5,6) = 19 pts
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rainy afternoon…
two bluejays at the feeder
shake off their feathers

Dica
(1,0,2) = 5 pts
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air raid -
cherry petals covering
a lost puppet

Cezar Ciobîcă

(0,0,5) = 5 pts
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burst of wind -
thistle carpet
on stair steps

Lavana Kray
(0,0,2) = 2 pts
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child make a bow
in front of the statue –
the glazed frost covers the street

Miorita
(0,1,0) = 2 pts
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No Points This Time
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anniversary -
talking about love
with a cover girl

Laura Csilla
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ragged blue jeans -
her Valentine Day gift
discovering

STOPS
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white everywhere –
undercover
snowdrops

Virginia Popescu

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