vineri, 28 martie 2014

Caribbean Kigo Kukai

CKK #49 Results



10
cool-down session-
the crooked eagle and the moon
back to back
--Lavana Kray-Romania
Votes: 11**** Points: 03
Comments:

5
snowman's carrot nose -
between the fresh snowdrops
is cooling down
--sTOPs Romania
Votes: ****** Points: 00
Comments: 

15
leaving the beach – 
the sand in my sandals
cools down
--Eduard TARA, Romania
Votes: 221*** Points: 09
Comments: Clear. I can feel the coolness between my toes.

24
cooling down
the quarrel between parents -
double rainbow
--Cezar C.
Votes: 5***** Points: 05
Comments: Last line suggests both harmony and beauty in cooling down.

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