5 haijini români printre nominalizați:
Iulian Ciupitu(Dan Iulian), Vasile Moldovan,
Constantin Severin, Lavana Kray și
Cezar Ciobîcă
I have seen angels—
but this is something common
in a hospital
— Iulian Ciupitu
(Bucharest, Romania)
Comment: ** A superb haiku. There is
no fault in any way
Nothing between years...
only fireworks
and shoots
— Vasile Moldovan
(Bucharest, Romania)
Comment: * We old timers think
"only." However,
young people should enjoy "only."
alone I engrave
your kiss ideograph
on the grain of wheat
— Constantin Severin
(Suceava, Romania)
Comment: * A haiku technique the
author surely has.
spring fever—
my old man takes a look
at his lifeline
— Cezar-Florin Ciobica
(Botosani, Romania)
Comment: ** The author takes a good
look at her better half.
stranded dolphin—
a wave comes and goes
comes and goes
— Dan Iulian (Bucharest,
Romania)
Comment: * We sometimes have small
whales
stranded on the Japanese shore. We all work
together and push them back
to the sea.
dog days—
a stray puppy under
the ice cream van
— Cezar-Florin Ciobica
(Botosani, Romania)
Comment: * I'll take care of that
cute one.
eclipse—
sunflowers
disoriented
— Dan Iulian
(Bucharest, Romania)
Comment: * This is not haiku,
technically,
but interesting.
five o'clock tea—
my shadow goes always
to my neighbour's yard
— Lavana Kray
(Iasi-Romania)
Comment: * You are going to have some
interaction with the neighbor.
swarm of fireflies—
even the scarecrow
looks handsome
— Cezar-Florin Ciobica
(Botosani, Romania)
Comment: * The author found a new
thing
through the phosphorescence of fireflies.
http://mainichi.jp/english/english/features/haiku/etc/archive/selection2013.html
Niciun comentariu:
Trimiteți un comentariu