miercuri, 8 aprilie 2015

Haiku in English: Best of 2014


Annual Selection 2014: 

Hisashi Inoue's way of writing

Selections and comments by Isamu Hashimoto



empty park
the poplar's shadow glides
on the slide
— Cezar-Florin Ciobica (Botosani, Romania). Posted 2 times.
Comment:* We have a "slide haiku" in Japan. "Sunday quiet ... / kindergarten petals / blow down the slide (Thomas Heffernan).



spring fever
in the street banner a lion
ready to jump
— Dan Iulian (Bucharest, Romania). Posted 1 time.
Comment:* A unique imaginatio



wedding without groom—
alone in the rain
white tulip
— Stelianna Cristina Voicu (Prahova, Romania). Posted 2 times.
Comment:* My way: without a groom / in the rain / a white tulip.


June market:
the old woman making
a chamomile mandala
— oana boazu (Galati, Romania). Posted 2 times.
Comment:* Just now I am sipping a cup of chamomile mandala tea that will be so helpful for my health.

back to school
tapping on my shoulder
a crane feather
— Cezar-Florin Ciobica (Botosani, Romania). Posted 2 times.
Comment:* So susceptible and delicate.

after apple harvest
forgotten in the orchard
a basket of stars
— Steliana Cristina Voicu (Prahova, Romania). Posted 2 times.
Comment:* Then a little boy came back toddling.


fish market:
not a single puddle
without a moving reflection
— oana boazu (Galati, Romania). Posted 2 times.
Comment:* A very busy year-end scene


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