Annual Selection 2014:
Hisashi Inoue's way of writing
Selections and comments by Isamu Hashimoto
empty park
the poplar's shadow glides
on the slide
— Cezar-Florin Ciobica (Botosani, Romania). Posted 2 times.
Comment:* We have a "slide haiku" in Japan. "Sunday quiet ... / kindergarten petals / blow down the slide (Thomas Heffernan).
spring fever
in the street banner a lion
ready to jump
— Dan Iulian (Bucharest, Romania). Posted 1 time.
Comment:* A unique imaginatio
wedding without groom—
alone in the rain
white tulip
— Stelianna Cristina Voicu (Prahova, Romania). Posted 2 times.
Comment:* My way: without a groom / in the rain / a white tulip.
June market:
the old woman making
a chamomile mandala
— oana boazu (Galati, Romania). Posted 2 times.
Comment:* Just now I am sipping a cup of chamomile mandala tea that will be so helpful for my health.
back to school
tapping on my shoulder
a crane feather
— Cezar-Florin Ciobica (Botosani, Romania). Posted 2 times.
Comment:* So susceptible and delicate.
after apple harvest
forgotten in the orchard
a basket of stars
— Steliana Cristina Voicu (Prahova, Romania). Posted 2 times.
Comment:* Then a little boy came back toddling.
fish market:
not a single puddle
without a moving reflection
— oana boazu (Galati, Romania). Posted 2 times.
Comment:* A very busy year-end scene
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