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Lavana Kray
1
dead leaves
carried away
by the wheels of a chair...
smell of sap
of all colours
2
dusty attic -
the label of a wedding dress
wedging
the trunk lid
ajar
3
the chrysanthemums
cling on to each other
under the snow duvet...
wrapped in your scarf
I take my coffee
4
a cruise ship
hulked out
of the fog -
the chestnut seller
trying to talk posh
5
postal card
for my birthday
reminds me
of
your plastic words...
6
summer
fun -
a thorn
strums
my hair
Vasile Moldovan
1
now love spring
written on the Golden Sands...
in all the direction
women and men's footprins
toward nowhere
2
daily watching
at the haven gate
a skylark
but on the carth we hear hardly
only the echo of its song
3.
a fire pearl
without and within our souls...
the old cactus
after a long waiting
just blossoms anew
4
woman looking
in the lake mirror -
a white lotus
is opening its flower
just toward her heart
textul Lavanei nr. 5 este o kyoka foarte frumoasa, se vede ca fiind consecventa creeaza cu adevarat, si celelate poeme, tanka sunt sensibile in special nr.3, care sugereaza o atmosfera melancolica de toamna
RăspundețiȘtergereTanka nr.4 scrisa de Vasile Moldovan trimite la insingurare, asa cum ii sta bine poetului sa se izoleze ca sa poata crea, apar aici doua motive: motivul oglinzii, specific liricii universale, ca si motivul lotusului specific spatiul poetic asiatic. Felicitari celor doi poeti, Laura