The Shiki Monthly Kukai January 2016 Kukai

January 2016 Results 

Kigo Theme: 

FIRST READING

back from war -

first Braille reading of a tale

to his boy

 

Lavana Kray

Romania

(0,3,7) = 13 pts

first reading;

a snowflock is stopping

at my window

 

Manuela Burlacu

(0,1,4) = 6 pts

first reading -

he asks her to make

coffee

 

Ana Drobot

(Bucharest, Romania)

(0,1,3) = 5 pts

and be

the first reading as a myth

(and the last one)

 

Andrei C. Szava

(1,0,0) = 3 pts

first reading of the year-

is that Grandpa’s handwriting

on the ex libris?

 

Cristian Mocanu

(0,0,1) = 1 pts

First reading was

just the last love letter

since the yesteryear 

 

Vasile Moldovan

(0,0,1) = 1 pts

first reading:

"Childhood memories"

by Ion Creangă

 

Miorita

Free Format Theme: 

MOVING WATER

 

flash floods...

the moment it all begins

to make sense

 

Ana Drobot

(Bucharest, Romania)

(1,2,5) = 12 pts

garden waterfall -

there are as many rainbows

as many viewers

 

Daniela Bullas

(0,2,2) = 6 pts

New Year’s outing

so many things passing

under the old bridge

 

Cristian Mocanu

(0,0,3) = 3 pts

**Easy to see and feel this one, and also interesting to see what "things" each reader's mind might fill in.

icicles...

my mom’s electrocardiogram

too long-expected

Manuela Burlacu

blue sky again –

the river depose

ice floe ashore

 

Miorita