joi, 2 iunie 2016
Results of the Indian Kukai # 16
theme-butterfly

FOURTH
PLACE
Hot
afternoon-
two
butterflies ventilate
the
bedroom
-
Constantin Stroe
[
Bucharest,Romania]
(
5,3,4 ) = 23 points
FIFTH
PLACE
butterfly
wings –
her
eyelashes
hiding
blue
-Capotă
Daniela Lăcrămioara
[
Galaţi ,Roumanie ]
(
4,6,1 ) = 19 points
......................................
butterfly...
what
was never
mine
-
Ana Drobot
[Bucharest,
Romania ]
(6,3,1
) =15 points
spring
breeze -
in
the convict cell
a
vagrant butterfly
-Dan
Iulian
[Bucharest-Romania]
(1,2,2
) = 11 Points
Reading
in the palm,
a
little blue butterfly
right
on the life line
-
Adina Enachescu
[
Bucharest,Romania ]
(
2,0,1 ) = 5 points
two
halfs of apple
and
a butterfly from train -
on
the station bench
- Nicu Stopel
[
Bucharest, Romania ]
(
1,0,1 ) = 4 points
lunch
break -
a
butterfly throbbing
in
the bird's beak
-
Lavana Kray
[
Iasi - Romania ]
(
0,2,0 ) = 4 points
butterfly
drifting
from
flower to flower -
wandering
mind
-
Miruna Covor
[
Bucharest, Romania ]
(3,0,0)
= 3 points
By
street lamp light
a
white butterfly's shadow
runs
on the walkside
-
Vasile Moldovan
[
Bucharest, Romania ]
(0,1,0)
= 2 points
spilled
basket of poppies…
the
little girl
chasing
butterflies
-
Steliana Cristina Voicu
[
Ploiesti, Romania ]
(2,0,0)
= 2 points
who
are you butterfly
beyond
your
color dust?
-Andrei
C. Szava
[Cluj-Napoca,
Romania]
miercuri, 1 iunie 2016
A Hundred Gourds 5:3 June 2016
picked finger -
I hear my heart pumping
red rose cells
Lavana Kray
in the rosarium
Grandpa teaches me a lesson
about friendship
Cristina Steliana Voicu
first communion –
the continuous whispers
of the fountain
Ana Drobot – Romania
steaming rain –
smell of apple pie
flooding the street
Lavana Kray – Romania
counting
Perseids …
the larkspur blossoms
I have to subtract
the larkspur blossoms
I have to subtract
Steliana Cristina Voicu – Romania
marți, 31 mai 2016
Cattails May 2016
a new nest
beside the airport—
swallow wings
un cuib nou lângă aeropor—
aripi de rândunică
Capotă Daniela Lăcrămioara
Romania
returning home—
a little bit of Greece
flavours my shirt
drumul spre casă—
pe tricoul meu un pic
din aromele Greciei
Steliana Cristina Voicu
Romania
a little bit of Greece
flavours my shirt
drumul spre casă—
pe tricoul meu un pic
din aromele Greciei
Steliana Cristina Voicu
Romania
black sky—
the sickle moon gives
it a prick
cer negru—
secera lunii
îl înţeapă
Lavana Kray
Romania
the sickle moon gives
it a prick
cer negru—
secera lunii
îl înţeapă
Lavana Kray
Romania
Haiga
Steliana Voicu, Romania
Lavana Kray, România
după furtună -
botez epava bărcii
cu numele meu
Tanka
refugees
camping on the outskirts
of the village—
the sound of a violin
moaning at intervals
refugees
camping on the outskirts
of the village—
the sound of a violin
moaning at intervals
refugiaţi
amplasaţi la marginea
satului—
se aude o vioară
din când în când
Lavana Kray
Romania
Romania
we met
on the crosswalk...
a kind of
memory about you
from my childhood
ne-am cunoscut
pe trecerea de pietoni…
un fel de
amintire despre tine
din copilărie
Steliana Cristina Voicu
Romania
Romania
luni, 30 mai 2016
duminică, 29 mai 2016
NHK WORLD - HAIKU MASTERS GALLERY - May 2016
Lavana Kray ne trimite:
Category 1: Haiku this photo
blossom park -
an old man enjoys playing
Category 2:Original photo haiku
birthday -
gathering of moths
war news -
knitting anew the sweater
for her son
http://www3.nhk.or.jp/nhkworld/en/tv/haiku_masters/gallery.htmlluni, 23 mai 2016
Le Prix Jocelyne-Villeneuve Haiku Canada mai 2016
2 e Mention honorable ex æquo –
choix de J. Belleau
souvenirs d’enfance –
effaçant la ville natale
premiers flocons de neige
Ana Drobot
Roumanie
J. B. : Le visible devient invisible. L’espace plein antérieur fait place au vide, à l’espace blanc actuel. Des « flocons de neige » oblitèrent une ville et, peut- être, un pan de vie. Le long tiret (cadratin) semble marquer la coupure. Je lis dans ce haïku une intériorité profonde exprimée avec délicatesse.
3e Prix
fleurs de cerisier
l’orphelin fredonne
la vie en rose
Cesar Ciobica
Roumanie
B. N. :
Je ressens un certain paradoxe, les trois aspects évoqués : le kigo de L1, le sujet de L2 et l’objet de L3 sont des clichés qui transcendent les cultures japonaises et occidentales, on est dans le kitch le plus total et en même temps la tendresse qui est évoquée me paraît très réelle, sincère.
J. B. :
Ce haïku résonne très fort en moi : qu’un orphelin (quel âge a cet enfant aujourd’hui ?) fredonne une chanson d’Édith Piaf, popularisée il y a plus d’un demi-siècle, me donne à penser qu’il s’agit pour lui d’un souvenir sonore indélébile – et son cœur bat peut-être un peu plus fort.
http://haikucanada.org/awards/PrixJocelyneVilleneuve2016.pdf
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