CKK #44 RESULTS
KIGO = RAINCOAT
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SECOND PLACE
Father's Day -
his raincoat still smells
of pipe tobacco
Cezar-Florin Ciobîca
Votes: 831***
Points: 17
Comments: conveys a fine sense of the lingering scent of
Father's
pipe tobacco on his raincoat--the haiku suggests the
scent lingers
after his passing-on.
RESULTS CONTINUES
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Alone on the street –
it’s time to listen again
to my old raincoat
Eduard TARA
Votes: 321****
Points: 10
...
rainy day today -
at highest quotation
raincoats' quote
STOPS
Votes: ******
Points: 00
...
your raincoat -
one year together
from the day we shared it
Lavana
Votes: 111***
Points: 06
...
endless autumn -
from a raincoat in hanger
the loneliness trickles
Dan Iulian
Votes: 321***
Points: 10
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