sâmbătă, 27 iulie 2013

Shiki Monthly Kukai/July 2013

July 2013 Results


A.Kigo Theme:
EVENING GLOW



War Memorial -
the sunset reddens
the deep silence

Cezar-Florin Ciobîcă
(1,2,2) = 9 pts
**Very moving. We have a good straightforward setting up first line,
and a phrase where even the sunset has its moment of silence. The
middle line really lifts the whole last two line phrase


first kiss –
in the girl’s eyes
evening glow

Virginia Popescu
PHOENIX
(0,2,5) = 9 pts

rainy evening glow -
the moon will rise again
on the dried pool
STOPS
(1,0,1) = 4 pts


sunset
swallowing my words ...
blood tests results

Sebastian Lucacs
(0,1,1) = 3 pts


relaxing evening -
a lifeguard is watching
the sinking of the sun
Cristina Oprea
(0,0,3) = 3 pts


so less
from my past -
evening glow

Eduard TARA
Romania
(0,0,1) = 1 pts

No Points

Evening glow -
Is this a poppy or
a shooting star?

Steliana Cristina Voicu
Ploiesti, Romania


autumn twilight
like a rainbow -
amazed child

Miorita

evening glow...
the old couple's gold rings
out of sight

Cristina-Monica Moldoveanu
**Intriguing phrase. Is it because of the end of day that the fear of
home invasion grows (although early morning and afternoon invasions
are more common), or is it a private practice between the couple?


B.Free Format Theme:
VEGETABLE(S)

old woman –
in her wrinkled hands
a smooth tomatoe

Virginia Popescu
PHOENIX
(0,5,6) = 16 pts

vegetable market -
wandering among
fresh colors

Eduard TARA
Romania
(0,1,4) = 6 pts

a group of girls
picking bedstraws -
the first stars

Miorita
(0,0,6) = 6 pts

small town
my freckled neighbor
sells tomatoes

Cristina-Monica Moldoveanu
(0,0,6) = 6 pts
**Very sweet! Tomatoes are fruit though, not vegetables, didn't your
neighbour know that?



Grilled eggplants –
The postman brings me
an old friend letter

Steliana Cristina Voicu
Ploiesti, Romania
(0,1,1) = 3 pts

the basic numbers -
another spoon of spinach
before the dessert

Cristina Oprea
(0,0,2) = 2 pts

steady drought ...
dreaming of
growing lettuce

Cezar-Florin Ciobîcă
(0,0,2) = 2 pts

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vineri, 26 iulie 2013

Caribbean kigo kukai



CKK #44  RESULTS

KIGO = RAINCOAT
***

SECOND PLACE



Father's Day -
his raincoat still smells
of pipe tobacco

Cezar-Florin Ciobîca
Votes: 831***
Points: 17

Comments: conveys a fine sense of the lingering scent of Father's
pipe tobacco on his raincoat--the haiku suggests the scent lingers
after his passing-on.


RESULTS CONTINUES
................................
Alone on the street –
it’s time to listen again
to my old raincoat

Eduard TARA
Votes: 321****
Points: 10
...
rainy day today -
at highest quotation
raincoats' quote

STOPS
Votes: ******
Points: 00
...
your raincoat -
one year together
from the day we shared it

Lavana
Votes: 111***
Points: 06
...
endless autumn -
from a raincoat in hanger
the loneliness trickles

Dan Iulian
Votes: 321***
Points: 10


http://wwwcaribbeankigokukai.blogspot.ro/2013/07/ckk-44-results.html#comment-form


marți, 23 iulie 2013

International Kukai/ camel photo


Results of the July 2013
International Kukai #16
Camel photo 

26 Haijin;
26 Haiku;
25 Cities;
8 Countries
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# 18. Cezar F. Ciobîcă,
Botosani, Romania (RO)
18 /// 1 , 2 , 8 = 15 ///

2nd Place

praying time—
the old camel's head points
towards Mecca

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# 22. Stops, Bucharest,
Romania (RO)
22 /// ,1, 1, 4= 9 ///

4th Place

eco tourism—
when your car
is out of gas

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http://rita-odeh.blogspot.ro/2013/07/results-of-july-2013-international.html


vineri, 19 iulie 2013

Din revista Ploc!, Nr. 44



Printemps – kigo & rythme libre


Primăvara – kigo şi ritm liber
 
Letitia Lucia Iubu

Fête des Mères –
sur le coin de la table
premier perece-neige



Ziua Mamei –
pe colţul mesei
primul ghiocel


Maria Tirenescu

le vieux parc –
parmi des bancs démolis
les violettes fleurissent

vechiul parc –
printe bănci dărâmate
înfloresc violete

Été - kigo impose & rythme libre
La chaleur
Les feux d’artifices
Vara - kigo impus şi ritm liber


Maria Tirenescu

La canicule –
le chien n’a plus une goutte
dans son écuelle

Caniculă –
câinele nu mai are nici un strop
în strachina lui

joi, 11 iulie 2013

Mainichi - Haiku in English



vineri, 5 iulie 2013

ASAHI HAIKUIST NETWORK/ By David McMurray



La tema Mt. Fuji, în 5 iulie 2013, David McMurray alege primul poemul Lavanei Kray:

Awaiting her son -

an old Mt. Fuji postcard

under her pillow...

Sînt remarcate de asemenea poemele lui Vasile Moldovan
 
Quite alone
an ant climbing up
Mt. Fuji

 și al Stelianei Cristina Voicu
 
The day ends
I am just a traveler
in a Fuji-san dream