sâmbătă, 31 octombrie 2015

Shiki Monthly Kukai October 2015 Results



Kigo Theme: SCARECROW

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 20 Points (locul al patrulea)
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scarecrow -
the language
I cannot speak

Ana Drobot
(Bucharest, Romania)
(1,6,5) = 20 pts
**Perhaps "a" in place of "the" in line 1?

on the narrow road
a shabby scarecrow 
points to the left

L.Csilla
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

grape harvest -
some bunches in
scarecrow's pockets

Petru-Ioan Gârda
(0,0,3) = 3 pts

Free Format Theme: SPARK

 spark -
fir-trees hang on
to the sun

Ana Drobot
Bucharest, Romania
(0,1,2) = 4 pts
 
new moon
the spark 
of hope

L.Csilla
(0,1,2) = 4 pts

comet days -
grandfather sharpens knives
at the grinder

Petru-Ioan Gârda
(0,0,3) = 3 pts

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