joi, 24 martie 2022

The 11th Setouchi-Matsuyama International Photo-Haiku Contest

 Haiku in English on a set them


Award for Excellence


cold stones
the “no” you said
between two steps

Eduard TARA




















Comment

The photo-haikuist crafted a conversation poem. We hear just the interlocutor’s side of the dialog, but we feel the author’s side through the coldness of the steps. The haiku maintains a good rhythm and perfect line endings that match the stride of the couple approaching Isaniwa Shrine who are likely in need of saying a prayer.











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