Kigo-ul pentru iulie-august 2012
a fost ,,Wind in the reeds"
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# 46. Cezar F. Ciobîcă, RO
a fost ,,Wind in the reeds"
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# 46. Cezar F. Ciobîcă, RO
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increasing
the lines on my face -
wind in the reeds
mărind numărul
ridurilor de pe față -
vânt prin păpuriș
# 03. Ailoaei Cristina
# 03. Ailoaei Cristina
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wind in the reeds -
in the old boat
a rag doll
in the old boat
a rag doll
vânt prin păpuriș -
în vechea barcă o
păpușă din cârpe
# 10. Dan Iulian, Romania
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wind in the reeds -
in the fisherman trawl
only waving stars
in the fisherman trawl
only waving stars
vânt prin păpuriș -
în năvodul pescarului
se zbat stelele
# 45. Ailoaei Cristina
# 45. Ailoaei Cristina
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wind in the reeds -
the haiku master
in meditation
the haiku master
in meditation
vânt prin păpuriș -
maestrul de haiku
în meditație
# 81. Ailoaei Cristina
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summer night -
only the wind in the reeds
moving the moon
only the wind in the reeds
moving the moon
noapte de vară -
doar vântul prin păpuriș
mai mișcă luna
doar vântul prin păpuriș
mai mișcă luna
# 82. Cezar F. Ciobîcă, RO
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cold wind in the reeds -
flock of swans gathering on
the moon's reflection
flock of swans gathering on
the moon's reflection
vânt rece prin păpuriș -
un cârd de lebede se-adună
pe luna din lac
# 05. Cezar F. Ciobîcă, RO
# 05. Cezar F. Ciobîcă, RO
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wind in the reeds -
through memory lane
rattling swords
through memory lane
rattling swords
vânt prin păpuriș -
pe banda memoriei
săbii zăngănind
# 13. Anisoara Iordache, Romania
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wind in the reeds -
only the bell returns
the sunset in a new dawn.
only the bell returns
the sunset in a new dawn.
vânt prin păpuriș -
doar clopotele readuc
apusu-n zorii noi
# 40. Gheorghe Postelnicu Stops, RO
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REI greeting
judokas leaving tatami -
wind in the reeds
judokas leaving tatami -
wind in the reeds
salutând REI
judoka iese de pe tatami -
# 51. Dan Iulian, Romania
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a fluttering wing
ripples the water -
wind in the reeds
ripples the water -
wind in the reeds
aripă-n zbor
vălurind apa -
vânt prin păpuriș
# 76. Gheorghe Postelnicu Stops, RO
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fisher's got asleep -
only the wind in the reeds
wavers the bobberpescar adormit -
only the wind in the reeds
wavers the bobberpescar adormit -
doar vântul prin păpuriș
îi mișcă pluta
îi mișcă pluta
# 78. Gheorghe Postelnicu Stops, RO
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winn the reeds
giving way to win
judo strategy
vântul prin păpuriș
i-arată calea de-a câștiga -
i-arată calea de-a câștiga -
strategie judo
# 85. Dan Iulian, Romania
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wind in the reeds -
a baby coot
jump out of the nest
vânt prin păpuriș -
un pui de lișiță
Domnule Ciobica,
RăspundețiȘtergereLa Concursul din May/June 30, 2012 "wedding / bride" Haiku Thread , editorii Sketchbook au ales pentru HAIKU-UL LUNII si doua poeme ale unor haijini romani (cu comentariile de rigoare):
wedding gifts—
in the bride’s bouquet
some lily of the valley
daruri de nuntă-
în buchetul miresei
câteva lăcrămioare
# 32. Dan Iulian, Romania
“The lily of the valley is a precious gift to be held dear. It conveys the sense of sweetness and a promise of happiness. For Christians lily of the valley are interpreted as the “tears of the Virgin Mary” and elicit the virtue of humility, which I equivocate with the virtue of truth, a very important element for a successful marriage. I don’t know how true this is: the lily of the valley has a reputation for attracting silver, but, perhaps, more importantly it is a symbol of spring and new life”
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bridal veil
floating in the wind—
acacia blossom
voalul miresei
plutind in vânt-
floare de salcâm
#190. Cristina-Monica Moldoveanu. RO
“With this haiku of Cristina-Monica Moldoveanu, the symbolism of the tree adds more meaning to this scene and the haiku can be read in two ways. The acacia thrives in harsh conditions and has endured for thousands of years despite drought. It also provides shelter for many animals. It is a symbol of endurance and protection”
http://poetrywriting.org/Sketchbook7-3MayJun2012-42/Sketchbook_7-3_MayJune_2012-42_Choices_Bernard_Gieske_Wedding_Threads.htm
Cu multumiri pentru atentie,
Dan Iulian.